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0 posted 2001-08-06 10:33 PM


We Were Meant To Be
By: Noah Eaton
8/5/01

When you first opened your eyes to me
I felt this was too good to be true
But when your lips touched mine
I learned to love you

When I hold your hand
All my dreams emote
My legs leap with joy
And you set my soul afloat

I’ve been kissed by a rose
Fainting to your scent
Waking to your rapture
Feeling our dreams transcend

The smiles that we share
The laughter that keeps us coming back for more
The tears together we cry
To see the hope that we have in store

Spring blooms deep down in my heart
When you love me
And you and me will always see
We were meant to be…


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1 posted 2001-08-06 10:45 PM


          WOW!!
Beautiful flow
Beautiful words
Beautiful poem!

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2 posted 2001-08-07 10:37 AM


enjoy
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3 posted 2001-08-07 09:11 PM


Noah,

   You write such sweet poetry   I muchly enjoyed  

TaraB

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4 posted 2001-08-07 09:28 PM


Spectacular tribute to a lifelong love.  Great write!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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