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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2001-08-06 06:35 PM


This is just an apology
to those whom I don't reply
but I'm just to tired
and I really just can't try.
But I really do read your words
although it doesn't seem to be so,
but I just really wanted
you to all realize and know.
I DO read your words
right now I just can't reply
it just seems to take so much effort
between my tears to try.
So I hope you will all forgive me
for not giving you my time,
but damn, right now I'm lucky
that I could even get this to rhyme.
So please I hope you all
will just bare with me a day or two
until I can again reply
to each and every one of you.


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 08-06-2001).]

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wpwpoet
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 99

1 posted 2001-08-06 06:38 PM


ok! hope your better soon.
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2001-08-06 06:57 PM


You take whatever time you need to and don't worry.  I believe I owe you a few dozen at least if not more.  You don't have to reply for us to know you are there and of course if you find a need to post poems to purge those haunting feelings then we will be here to read and listen.
Terryloveiris_85
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 61
The middle of nowhere
3 posted 2001-08-06 07:02 PM


it's alright, i'm still glad u read our poems. *hugs*
~iris

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2001-08-06 07:10 PM


I understand
I could have written this myself
I also cannot respond, but only to a few
THank you. I'm sure there are others also who don't have time or, like me, are absorbed by life right now
Hope those tears go away
Liz

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-08-06 07:13 PM


Wouldn't it be nice if there was a separate marker that told us how many times we had just been read?  Would it matter by who?  Nah...just a "click" tally would do!

As for Mark...LOL...he owes EVERYONE!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-08-06 07:43 PM


Nothing to apologize for, life is more important and live it!  Be good to yourself and we are always here...

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-08-06 08:00 PM


thru these gentle tears that just won't go away tonight......I say..
"God bless you all, thank you"

(sometimes the light seems so dim, it's hard to see the light of day)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
8 posted 2001-08-06 09:57 PM


Hey, sometimes that happens...we do like the poem, but we just can't seem to find the right words to say how we liked it...at least, that's what happens to me... ...

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
9 posted 2001-08-06 10:25 PM


Sometimes, sleep can make a difference
To a sorrowful heartache.
Sometimes, you find the key
To mending the pain.
When the tears slow, streaming
And you begin dreaming,
May you find peace on your pillow tonight.
May everything seem brighter by daylight.

vandana
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USA
10 posted 2001-08-07 10:41 AM


hope you're better thanks for sharing
Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
11 posted 2001-08-07 10:58 AM


my dear aunt, we don't want u 2 be sad! no no no   so perk up and enjoy life....i'll do as much as i can do help u.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
12 posted 2001-08-07 11:05 AM


We know and we understand. Take care.
This one is a good one.

Melton

Constance
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 393
Ohio
13 posted 2001-08-07 12:08 PM


I believe that there is no real,absolute,50/50 split in this life-- not in work, relationships, or in anything else.I also believe that we strive to come as close to equal sharing as we can, but when we are unable, there are those who ARE able, who understand, and who ask no more than we can give---even if we can give nothing.

You do what you need to do to heal Gentle Spirit. The best gift you can give us is news that you are feeling better.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
14 posted 2001-08-07 07:37 PM



I too can not reply as much as I want to
allthough I think mine is another reason
don't feel sad now and don't feel ashamed
take your time there will be another season

a season when all things don't look as bad
as they're coming on to you right now dear
sometimes life sucks and sometimes it's fair
wait for this new season, we will wait here


Titia  

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
15 posted 2001-08-07 07:41 PM


So sorry for the pain you feel and the tears you cry, GS.  You have nothing to apologize for.  We do understand and care about you very much.  ((((hugs))))

LW

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

16 posted 2001-08-07 10:54 PM


Stac, I love you too hon, and everyone else,
I thank you all.  I wish I could say today was better.......but......big sighs.....
thanks all.  I just feel so very....very tired.  Hugs to all.....God bless all.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

kaile
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singapore
17 posted 2001-08-08 12:31 PM


hi gentle spirit,

don't feel apologetic for not being able to reply...we all do the best we can...i understand...been there, done that, just allow time to diminish your weariness...

Mysteria
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British Columbia, Canada
18 posted 2001-08-09 12:17 PM


You know the comments don't mean half as much as knowing you read it, thank you.  
Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
19 posted 2001-08-09 09:47 AM


We understand,
don't worry!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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with you
20 posted 2001-08-09 10:02 AM


awww...dang, this is sooooo sweet...no worries, just smile ok?  
SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
21 posted 2001-08-09 11:52 AM


Don't worry about us...of course we understand!  You just concentrate on getting happy again    You took the first step by opening your heart and letting us in!  Look at all the people who care about you....that's a beautiful thing!
Hugs and such,
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
22 posted 2001-08-09 12:22 PM


Reading is good - Responding? - you'll get around tuit soon - No problem...
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

23 posted 2001-08-10 10:13 AM


OHHHHH, I don't have the words to express how you have all made me feel.  I am in awe of your kindness and caring.  Thank you all is about the best I can come up with, and God Bless ya'll.  Much hugs and love,
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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