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Discovering the Story
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Discovering the Story |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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 Discovering the Story at times you read like an open book I put it down pick it back up to take another look confusing and withdrawn are a few chapters of you but your pages open up again in full view on rainy nights and candles I could snuggle with you in the quilt to discover all the words in which you are built I read you at times long past dawn the plot so interesting before knowing it the night is gone the more I read the more I discover I have to explore this story from cover to cover "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Aah, Intimacy Throw your heart out in front of you And run out to catch it. [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 08-06-2001).] |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Hi! that's a cool poem, slick lady. another page, another surprise. what is that thing with the horns in that picture though? ok, i'm weird...tom |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just when you think that you've read the whole book. . . excellent helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
LOL tom i used a dictionary as the prop wanted a book... well read giggle the horned thing is.......... (ok, ok really it's a koo-doo an african antelope) |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Hi Helen! ok, lets argue later, i just like your poem, it's like looking at someone and seeing different stuff each time. i really like these lines: "on rainy nights and candles" why? who knows? i guess that's just weird stuff, but i think it's cool. do some more like that and don't worry about the dictionary, ok? it's just stuff. what exactly is a "koo doo," it's not in my dictionary..." he he!...tom |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Hi Helen! ok, lets argue later, i just like your poem, it's like looking at someone and seeing different stuff each time. i really like these lines: "on rainy nights and candles" why? who knows? i guess that's just weird stuff, but i think it's cool. do some more like that and don't worry about the dictionary, ok? it's just stuff. what exactly is a "koo doo," it's not in my dictionary..." he he!...tom |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
giggle...too funny...you crack me up |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
I think I saw one of those here in the country, last night. |
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