if I could play with sadness

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Open Poetry #15

if I could play with sadness

wpwpoet
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since 2001-07-25

Posts 99

0 posted 2001-08-06 06:08 PM

           If I could play with sadness

                Re.treat : Advance
                  Cautious...ly
             Deter.mined in.stability
                  of words might
              e.race the hunted day,
              where dark.ness stays
                     light.
             Re.treat : Advance defeat
                 co.080401wpwpoet

[This message has been edited by wpwpoet (edited 08-06-2001).]

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-08-06 09:13 PM

to "play with sadness" .... an intriguing concept...... well done

i especially liked the dots or periods you used within the words to accentuate the syllables in the meter (maybe that's not what you intended but that's how i read it)

thanks for the read!! enjoyed this....

wpwpoet
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since 2001-07-25

Posts 99

2 posted 2001-08-07 06:23 AM

Oh definatly. thank you for reading I admire your work greatly and am happy you enjoyed this...wpwpoet

Constance
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since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

3 posted 2001-08-07 12:23 PM

I always enjoy reading a poem with a difference. This is one of those, and it says something meaningful too. I like it!

wpwpoet
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since 2001-07-25

Posts 99

4 posted 2001-08-07 12:33 PM

thank you constance, I often try to be non-conformist with poetry;yet that too is conforming is'nt it...

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