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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-06 04:50 PM



Sometimes even the blind can "see"
when everything is silent
and you open your heart
you understand things
that before you failed to recognize
Human nature
doesn't include this
But it can be acquired
through humility
Keep quiet
if you want to hear
whispers, echoes
will become clear
Written words
that you couldn't unravelled
will appear to make sense
if only you closely "see".


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Sven
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1 posted 2001-08-06 06:29 PM


indeed my friend. . . you understand. . .  

wonderfully done. . . thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
2 posted 2001-08-06 06:36 PM


Well written, sometimes I wonder if this is insight or something more...

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

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