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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2001-08-06 09:45 AM


Pick and Choose
Which do you do forever,
Endless knots
All forgot,
Doing always and never,
Or striving
And pushing,
Against boulders of the mind,
A coin tossed,
Always lost,
Forever searching to find;
Never lose,
And winning not forever.

Gloom


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RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-08-06 10:56 AM


Gloom,

Something of the Gordian Knot to this. Very intricate. Bob

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-08-06 11:05 AM



Prof., I would have to agree with Bob...there's a bit more to unknot in this....

a good, thinking read....

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