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ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng

0 posted 2001-08-06 07:02 AM


Many things,
New things today...
I must go to
Make my way...
Or I'll soon
Be running late!

Yet, do not be
Discouraged...
A long day it
Will be for me...

And when the
Early evening
Sunshine gently
Falls, giving
Cooling shadow
And relief,

I will be back
Again.

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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-08-06 08:53 AM


Yes.......I really like this one, as it tells it like it is!  We run around all day keeping busy, but at night...there is home!
Excellent!!  

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


Constance
Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393
Ohio
2 posted 2001-08-06 08:56 AM


"giving
Cooling shadow
And relief,"

beautifully said.

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