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ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng

0 posted 2001-08-06 06:53 AM


He stopped in,
My truest love...
How I admire
His sweet
Dedication!

For if he did
Not love me
True,
He would
Not have come.

How he strives
To sort this
Mishmosh,
Working so
Hard for me!

He works and works
And struggles
Just to make me see,
Just to get
Through to me....

I want him to know
I love him, too.

ShannonM

© Copyright 2001 ShannonM - All Rights Reserved
WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04
Posts 212

1 posted 2001-08-06 06:56 AM



Precious love shines through your words.

Willie

ShannonM
Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng
2 posted 2001-08-06 06:58 AM


You'd better believe it, my friend.

ShannonM

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
3 posted 2001-08-07 12:10 PM


It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
4 posted 2001-08-07 11:55 PM


I can see the love in this! Beautifully written
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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