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Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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0 posted 2001-08-06 12:08 PM



Someone Loves You

Don't turn those pretty brown eyes blue
There is someone who thinks a lot of you
I know you are down
And feeling like no one cares
But just take a few minutes today
And look at you through my eyes
Look at you from my mind
For my eyes have seen you
At your worst and at your best
In this old world
They hold you above  the rest
They have seen you at your slenderness
They have seen you at your heaviest
These eyes have looked at you in tenderness
These eyes have looked at you in anger
But they have always looked at you with  love
So when you are feeling low
Your mind feels like its going to blow
Just stop and say how would he look at me
And you will see
In your minds eyes
Someone that loves you
ME

Alan Hatcher
2000

© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Cheryl Flemming
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 102

1 posted 2001-08-06 12:12 PM


This is beautiful Alan.To see what the other one sees through the eyes of love as you see the inner beauty.Wonderful poem.Lucky lady!
Blue December
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since 2001-07-19
Posts 5

2 posted 2001-08-06 12:13 PM


Alan! I love this poem; it's wonderful. I think I will take the wise advice you offer in it. Absolutely lovely!
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2001-08-06 12:18 PM


What a lucky woman...seen through your eyes
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2001-08-06 12:25 PM


Don't we all wish we could see ourselves through anothers eyes sometime or other...especically when those eyes see as yours do my friend.

jwesley

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
5 posted 2001-08-06 04:14 AM


Hey Alan , thanks for those eyes and ears today, it did help
Hope

illusion
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since 2001-06-19
Posts 296

6 posted 2001-08-06 09:37 AM


Love and acceptance - what a powerful combination.   This is beautiful and I hope she appreciates what she has in you.  
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

7 posted 2001-08-06 11:03 AM



A good write on how things really are...through good times and bad, this is how it is....

well done Alan....

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-08-06 04:48 PM


someone is very blessed!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

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