Blue Eyes Filled With Tears

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Open Poetry #15

Blue Eyes Filled With Tears

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2001-08-05 10:25 PM

Blue Eyes Filled With Tears

Blue eyes filled with tears,
tears of grief for things,
things passed on that touched,
touched so deeply into the soul,
soul that loved beyond belief,
belief that faltered and died and left,
left a heart broken, bruised and bleeding,
bleeding from blue eyes in the form of tears.

w. james beard, jr.
(c) August 2001

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2001-08-05 11:46 PM

jwesley--It is good to see you here, but this is such a sad poem. I guess part of life must be that way. I thought it an interesting form you used. Well expressed!

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2001-08-06 12:28 PM

Interesting write....it as an endless feel to it....the repitition of the words in each line and then the way it ends where it started....one to ponder!
Hope the blues don't last long!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-08-06 12:31 PM

You pour such sorrow into a clever presentation technique ~ Hugs~

Melissa~

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-08-06 12:40 PM

Unique write...enjoyed the repetition you used in this!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2001-08-06 06:29 PM

jwesley - very expressive feelings you write. A handkerchief of mine for you, to wipe the tears...

BC

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