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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2001-08-05 08:38 PM



Thou hast given him his hearts desire, and hast not withheld the request of his lips,


Soft greeted,
So long before was the first,
Through despair,
But with care,
Surviving the very worse;

Time went on,
Always on,
Refuge was always in a kiss,
Between two,
And years flew,
Years marked with that same bliss.

Now the end,
Touching lips in a coffin.

Gloom

For Jewel to ease her loss.

Harold 1942 2001


© Copyright 2001 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2001-08-05 10:35 PM


Professor Gloom
Your words were so heartfelt and so sad, this piece sent a shiver down my spine.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2001-08-06 05:09 AM


Thank you, Sue,
you honor me with your praise.

Gloom

Sven
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3 posted 2001-08-06 07:05 PM


this is the prayer of everyone. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dulcinea
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4 posted 2001-08-06 07:14 PM


I am sure your heartfelt comforts will be treasured in the days ahead, very well done Professor!
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