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Trina
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 97


0 posted 2001-08-05 05:15 PM


how dark
can it get in here?
when the sounds
are hushed and
the wind no longer blows

how dark
can it get in here?
when the silence
becomes eerie and
your whispers become screams

secrets no one knew
now become well known
to every mind and
every life there is
your's becomes darker



© Copyright 2001 Trina - All Rights Reserved
Sinister Handed
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since 2001-08-05
Posts 58

1 posted 2001-08-06 01:45 AM


Being alone with your conscience can be a cruel punishment sometimes. Truly dark images depicted by your powerful words.
Trina
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 97

2 posted 2001-08-06 04:31 PM


Thanx for reading,glad you liked it.

Take care,

Trina

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-09-25 03:31 AM



when the silence
becomes eerie and
your whispers become screams


Hey, I'm a little late but it's better than never right?  
Just thought I'd let you know that I really enjoyed your poem.  You've evoked many emotions I've felt before.

May you find brighter times!
*hugs*
~Krista  

Trina
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 97

4 posted 2001-09-25 10:09 PM


Hey thanx, so glad you took time out to read and reply, yes better late then never  
All comments are always very appreciated whether good or bad. Even happier urs was good though.

Take care,

Trina

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