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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-08-05 01:41 PM





laying out the oats
green heads gone golden by time
harvest comes again

swinging scythe by hand
twining oat straw in bundles
careful of the crown

stacking shocked bundles
lean to lean conically
oat heads fluttering




© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-05 02:37 PM


Karilea~
Vicky and I were just talking of the harvest moon ...
This is so lovely~
Nostalgic stirrings~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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2 posted 2001-08-05 04:21 PM


Ahh, it looks like the early days of harvest in the new promised lands that drew so many..very well done, Sissie..very gentle smile
jwesley
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3 posted 2001-08-05 11:14 PM


Yea...and I could see, feel and smell it all, and not because of the picture either!

jwesley

vlraynes
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4 posted 2001-08-10 12:18 PM



Karilea-
   Now, how did this one get past me?
   Glad I found it before it got away.
   Yes...I was just telling Marge the
   other day, how much I LOVE the harvest moon.
   And...I love this poem too.
   Very lovely indeed.

   Hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



citizenx
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5 posted 2001-08-10 05:08 PM


stacking shocked bundles
lean to lean conically
oat heads fluttering


the last line is especially gentle and beautiful.

shadows flicker sweet end tame
dancing like crazy mourners" magazine


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