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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-08-05 06:06 AM


The Wonder Of

If you.
If you could only see.
The beauty.
The beauty that
lives in me.
Than I.
Than I would surely know.
That I.
That I have found a heart.
A heart to love me so.
And I would take you
into my arms of love.
So I could feel you
and the touch of your love.
And who could tell
how this love would grow.
Only we two would know
the path of our love's flow.
Than you and I would thank
heaven above for the wonder of.
The wonder of
these two hearts in love.

Jameslee@August05,2001

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-08-05 08:37 AM



Ah yes...many will enjoy this wonder of you..well done, James....

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-08-05 03:17 PM


Thank you Sunshine...I appreciate your response...James
MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2001-08-06 09:46 PM


Love always deserves to shine to the top, so here's another "bump".  I like the subtle experimentation you've done here with form, James.  Keep writing & I'll keep reading.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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