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- Destiny's Dance - My 3000th Post |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Destiny's Dance  Tangerine-lustre sun blends into twilight's trill as Venus paints the land with her vibrant spill crystal shadows cascade...time touches infinity souls unite on angel wings...mingling with destiny with lush of hazel stars faith shines as a precious jewel ablaze over senses whils't we bathe in heaven's pool the dance of romance intoxicates in ecstasy of embrace we sip from glory's goblet through clouds of vanilla lace relishing in amourous affair on words of uplifting cliche logic never questions why immersed in reverie's say we've opened the box of Pandora, stirring poetic pallette across pebbled sands of kismet - the verse of heart is set   Kisses of flit and flirt awake as butterflies ever high - flutterings of our passion across diamond glint of sky reflections glow of how I look in dewdrops of your eyes I grace peace at last, pirouetting in seductive surprise racing strokes of rhapsody in the fold of cosmic flight in realms of fantasy in Cupid's cathedral of candlelight entwining on alabaster mist across Nirvana's lullaby reaching climax of Utopia in masterpiece of lovestruck sigh you reach the depths of my being on whirlwinds of eternity in unison with heaven's heartbeat - fate's luscious melody robins serenade imagination, robed in feathers of scarlet chiffon we ride copper ruffles of whistling leaves flowing into dawn in the valley of ballroom bliss our journey has just begun through waltz of cherished vows...together we are one By Melissa P. Monette ~ ~ ~ Words cannot express how thankful I am to each and every one of you for your friendship and daily poetic offerings  This is my home away from home, I love this place! ~ ~ ~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 08-04-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Kisses of flit and flirt awake as butterflies ever high - flutterings of our passion across diamond glint of sky reflections glow of how I look in dewdrops of your eyes I grace peace at last, pirouetting in seductive surprise" CONGRATULATIONS!!  this is gorgeous!!!!! [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 08-04-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, congratulations Melissa and a fine job! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, You use your palette of many colors very well, a good job and a good read. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Beautiful piece...and Congratulations! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tangerine-lustre sun blends into twilight's trill as Venus paints the land with her vibrant spill crystal shadows cascade...time touches infinity souls unite on angel wings...mingling with destiny with lush of hazel stars faith shines as a precious jewel ablaze over senses whils't we bathe in heaven's pool the dance of romance intoxicates in ecstasy of embrace we sip from glory's goblet through clouds of vanilla lace relishing in amourous affair on words of uplifting cliche logic never questions why immersed in reverie's say we've opened the box of Pandora, stirring poetic pallette across pebbled sands of kismet - the verse of heart is set ========================= WOWZERS AND YOWZERS!! Melissa this is FABULOUS writing... the imagery is exquisite...and the whole poem is a grandious level of inspire... your vocab choices, your cadence and those very cool alliterations sprinkled throught out the poem adds to this ones enchanting charms.... a wonderful write to celebrate your milestone Congrats and thank you dear poetess for the many kind replies to my work that make up some of this number... and most of all thank you for the several beautiful poems you have gifted to me in memory of my butterfly love DeVante' ... I cherish them  and you slow burn ... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa my friend, there just aren't enough words to tell you how utterly wonderful this is. . . Since you've been here, your work has grown by leaps and bounds every day. . . this is just the beginning. . . It's a wonderful poem to mark for this ocassion. . . just as you are a wonderful person. . . and a good friend. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 Thank you all so much for your generous replies and for your support Gawd, I love this place! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Melissa Honeybee - congrats on your 3000th. I don't know if I can count that high! And the writing is suberb, with the deepest of feelings... BC |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Melissa, what can I say that the others haven't? This is amazingly beautiful. Congrats on your 3000. Juls |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Melissa, Breathtaking, and so beautiful beyond mere words. Your gift of talent truly shines in every work you have done on this Forum. The imagery you create in all of your writing is something we can all reflect on, and dream on. Congratulations on so many works of art you have shared with us all... Elise |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Congratulations!!! Beautifully woven, wonderful flow, a great 3000th! there's only one tiny mechanical thing that slowed my read: Kisses of flit and flirt awake as butterflies ever high - flutterings of our passion across diamond glint of sky I think, in my noviceness of form, that it would flow better with these line breaks: Kisses of flit and flirt awake as butterflies ever high-flutterings of our passion across diamond glint of sky I think your rhyme will still be felt and heard, but stopping the line in the middle of high-flutterings slowed the flow. This really stood out to me as the remainder of the poem is so impeccably done. Nevertheless, whatever you think, or what someone who is more conscious of form thinks, it's a beautiful 3000th post, Melissa!!! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Melissa! Congratulations on 3,000! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully written, Melissa!! Congratulations!!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Mel, This was beautiful hon! Wonderful awesome imagery. Your vocab and rhyming are absolutely perfect. congrats sweets on 3000!! Beautiful poem, just beautiful. Thank you also for your wonderful friendship. Take care and I'll be in touch soon. Amy "but i see your true colors, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful Melissa, and congratulations on 3000. You are a special part of this place, with your lovely woven stories. Sandra |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Hats off, this is an execellent write by an excellent poetress, Congratulations to you, Melissa. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, WOW again! You just keep amazing me! I'm adding this to my Mellissa Library! Congratulations on your Three Thousandth Post, Another mile marker on your road to Greatness! Peace and good health my Friend, Dennis :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Congratulations Melissa on your 3000th post! WOW! this is truly breathtakingly beautiful! Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Congrats, I'm so glad I popped in today! I loved the "tangerine" sun imagery....A beautiful poem, lady! Hugs |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
WOW! This piece certainly highlights your writing talents. It is WONDERFUL! Congratulations on the 3000 and on this beautiful poem Liz |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
CONGRATULATIONS ON POSTING 3000!! Melissa, Your poem is exquisite. For sure one of your best, if not the best. Hugs, Deb |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This would have been wonderful for any post, but 3000th, huh?? Wow! What a gorgeous way to ring the bell. jwesley |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Melissa, I have to tell you this was perfect! Congratulations, what a marker for your 3000th post, and an impressive write it truly was. ~To see real beauty you must first look with your heart~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Melissa, This is absolutely wonderful!!! I can't even tell you in words...you touched my heart dear!!! Congrats on the 3000th! that is great!! Hugs Cindi |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much everyone for celebrating this milestone with me! I didn't expect this many replies, you have all made my day!  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
melissa...sorry i'm late for the party  ...CONGRATS 3000 wow oh wow...beautiful poem...helen |
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