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Samia
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Earth of corse!

0 posted 2001-08-04 09:48 PM



My heart pulls me up.
Up and up I go
flying  into space,
forever free,
more alive than when I was ---
Hello ancient souls,
Mamasetto, Grandpa Hamed,
Great grandma Viola Henrietta
and Great grandpa Ed.
I love you,
we missed you,
your daughters and sons,
your millions of
daughters and sons,
living and living and living
and then dying and dying
again and again,
we dance through your Spirits,
forever twisting and turning
through Time,
We die and fly up into space,
forever free in nature’s embrace,
We will join you ancient souls
in Time.


© Copyright 2001 Samia Hamed - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-08-04 10:27 PM


this is so beautiful   I enjoyed this very much  
rwood
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2 posted 2001-08-04 10:32 PM


A calling verse! Being reunited with loved ones is a very merciful and tender reward for living in this time. Very well done.
Sincerely,
Regina

Krawdad
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3 posted 2001-08-04 11:45 PM


While I hold a rather different view of all of this, I do like the way you have expressed the "family."
I enjoyed the read.

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4 posted 2001-08-05 12:22 PM


in time. . . yes. . . all in time. . .

well done. . . I like the flow of this, it goes well with the idea of moving up. . .

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-08-05 09:39 AM



Yes, this read likes me very much...

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-08-05 09:47 AM


yes, we have to be at peace and make the most of living while we can, this is soothing in a way and also sad.

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

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7 posted 2001-08-05 09:58 AM


sigh...the peace and tranquility...
vandana
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8 posted 2001-08-05 09:59 PM


ENJOY
jwesley
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9 posted 2001-08-05 10:46 PM


Enjoyed the way you put this, my friend...good write (and thoughts)

jwesley

shadow974
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10 posted 2001-08-05 10:53 PM


Well written, I enjoyed it much, there will come a time...

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

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