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elusive1
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 15
NC

0 posted 2001-08-04 08:18 PM


YET AGAIN


the self-imposed sadness
clouds my beliefs
yet again

the thoughts
hound my being
questioning everything

seems the strength once claimed
as the all-encompassing view
has vanished

I am blind
to what I know in my mind
is true

delusion
yet again
governing my life

maybe tomorrow
will bring the enlightened answers
closer to my heart

yet again


[This message has been edited by elusive1 (edited 08-04-2001).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-08-04 08:42 PM


perhaps so. . .

well done. . . questions well asked. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-08-04 08:53 PM


the self-imposed sadness
clouds my beliefs
yet again

the thoughts
hound my being
questioning everything

seems the strength once claimed
as the all-encompassing view
has vanished

I am blind
to what I know in my mind
is true
==================================

there are so many mirrors in this its scary...
well done contenmplative piece...
you ask for the answers so many of us search for.
Welcome to Passsions elusive.
take care
jm

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

rwood
Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
3 posted 2001-08-05 09:10 AM


You'll get a firm grasp again on things, just so you'll see how much you can't know at one time.   It's in the trying! Very well put.
Sincerely,
Regina

wpwpoet
Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99

4 posted 2001-08-05 09:18 AM


the battle rages on!mind versus soul.oh that my body would do what my soul would have it.
snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
5 posted 2001-08-05 07:19 PM


Excellent description of the clouded view that overtakes us...great write...

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
6 posted 2001-08-05 08:24 PM


Well written, I hope you find your answers. I'm still asking.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
7 posted 2001-08-05 09:53 PM


WELCOME TO PASSION ENJOY
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