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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-08-04 07:37 PM


Backing Up to Cpat
Virginia Salter

Zymurgy of grain has made
You
Xenophobic
While
Visiting a bar you thought would make you
Uphoric
Tasting all the
Salty nuts and pretzels,
Resting in the dish,
Quite absentmindedly.  The
Picture in the bowl
Of
Nasturtiums and a prize
Made you
Lick your lips behind your
Kangaroo disguise.
Just as you were
Inching away to
Hide your eyes, I
Gave you a sloppy kiss
For killing all the flies.
Eating at the bar is unlike
Dining at the Ritz, well as far as I know,
Cuz I’ve never had the pleasure of eating Welsh Rare
Bits.
And so, kind sir, I bid adieu from belly to the bar with you.

© August 4, 2001

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 08-04-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-04 08:13 PM


VAS....this is great!! I like how you did this  
Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-08-04 08:17 PM



Way to be creative, Virginia  

Melissa~

VAS
Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2001-08-04 08:18 PM


thank you, both, btw, it's to be read with a drunken stupor of speech  
rwood
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4 posted 2001-08-04 10:22 PM


LOL! "I Love you Man! No really, I mean I love you!" "You are the best bud a person could have." Hicup! (Wonderful write!)
Sincerely,
Regina

[This message has been edited by rwood (edited 08-04-2001).]

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