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My heart |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Never allowed My heart to feel for anyone ever as I feel for you and each night I wonder why It is you I need so much When way down deep I always know One day you'll leave Slip from my life Release me into abyss My only solace is one garauntee; The undoubted return Of my fenced-off heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Unfortunately life is not guaranteed...but hearts are meant to be shared...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's all about learning to love.....giving pieces of your heart is part of the process...loved this Jenn  "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jenn~ Tear down those fences, gal~ Love is just a meadow away~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Jenn This was written with such beauty and sadness and I loved every word. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks to all of you. I have all of these emotions running rampant right now, and all I can do is write them down. Thanks for the replies and comments. Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and in the writing. . . we find understanding. . . wonderfully done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely honest poem, thanks for sharing! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
As always, much appreciated.  Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Unfortunately, life has no guarantees, but this should not dissuade you from opening up to others thanks for the read jenn hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sad to see such love go back to a gaurded heart...the world is full of so many gaurded hearts that I think we are becoming superficial with ourselves. Good poem! Good read! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
My heart has always been very guarded. But I'm proud to say I've been opening up tremendously. Things in life are scary, however, you have to at least try every now and again. There is someone who makes it impossible for me not to try. Thank you for your comments.Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-28-2001).] |
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