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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2001-08-04 02:12 PM





When all is said and done,
and time has run it’s course...
And all the waiting patiently is through...
The doors have all been shut,
and there is no remorse...
There’ll be a brand new road for me and you...

You know I’m going to be the one,
who is waiting here...
To wrap you in the web of love I’ve spun...
And never will your heart cry out in pain or fear...
We’ll be as one,
when all is said and done...

When all is said and done,
we’ll join as lovers must...
Our souls will mate for all eternity...
Our hearts have long since pledged each
to the other’s trust...
On angel’s wings, we’ll fly together, free...

Our spirits soar, look forward to the time at hand...
The laughter shared,
and other joys to come...
And, Darling, soon...we will begin to understand...
We are eternal, as the sun...
We’ve shared our lifetimes, more than one...
And time is ours,
when all is said and done...


The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 08-04-2001).]

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illusion
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since 2001-06-19
Posts 296

1 posted 2001-08-04 03:04 PM


A beautiful testimony of hope - and determination.  
Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
2 posted 2001-08-04 04:08 PM


Well friend - you have outdone yourself on this one.  This is absolutely beautiful and I know that it is coming from a kind and loving heart.  This is a keeper.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-08-04 05:14 PM


Beautiful desires Sunnyone...James
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-08-04 06:14 PM


IT certainly did come from a kind and loving heart. I enjoyed this so much.

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-08-04 06:55 PM


Sunny, I like this one lots. What a wonderful story, and happy ending to come..
Sandra

walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
6 posted 2001-08-04 08:02 PM


So beautiful, so romantic, love is eternal when true, thanks for this one!
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