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Thoughts of You |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
As I lay me down to sleep Drowning in thoughts of you deep I know that also you lay Dreams of me displayed Together in souls entwined Eternal in transient time Pioneers in another world We don’t have to be told There is a knowledge within Unspoken whispers yet again That because we’re one made of two, I’m smiling these thoughts of you Wrapped in peaceful bliss Halo retired dream kissed Salvation is sweetly dressed In what my dreams possess It never fails, tried and true I drift unconscious in thoughts of you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wrapped in peaceful bliss Halo retired dream kissed Salvation is sweetly dressed In what my dreams possess It never fails, tried and true I drift unconscious in thoughts of you =========================== Beautiful, romantic piece PK... with your gift for writing the longing and and poetic devotion, and tieing it up in a bow of cadence. this is a *sigh* just waiting to happen. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . great flow here PK. . . a prayer well said. . . great job. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
Very sweet. ShannonM |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PK~ darn it! I am fumbling for words to tell you how much I like this.....you got me tongue twisted and stuck on stupid LOL....I LOVE this  |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
....tongue twisted and stuck on stupid'...cracking up at SEA. PK---I love the romance of your write, especially the way you fall to sleep. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PK...a very tender, lovely penning...thank you for sharing this one! |
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