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Open Poetry #15

Take Me Back To Heaven

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-08-04 08:17 AM

Take Me Back To Heaven

It's been awhile since
I hugged and kissed you
and you know I really
have missed you.

Perhaps it's time
for us to rediscover
exactly why we
liked each other.

I long
to refamilarize
myself with
your sexy eyes.

And then of course
we could recompare
your luscious lips
and silky hair.

Now that seems like
a wonderful start
so take me back
to heaven sweetheart.

Jameslee@August04,2001
I'm not sure if recompare
is a real word or not but
it definately should be.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-08-04 08:43 AM

James,
Cute enjoyed the read.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-08-04 09:14 AM

hey why not James?? I like it!!!

great job my friend. . .

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SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-08-04 11:30 AM

If it's not a word, you're right, it should be!

which is my motto too when I make up words....as long as people know what you're talking about, who really cares?

Nice write.
Take care,
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-08-04 05:12 PM

That you Seymour, Sven and Smitten Kitten for reading and responding...James

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-08-06 08:26 PM

Sounds like a glimpse of Heaven to me... and regarding the word -- I say: use it enough times that others will start using it, and suddenly, you'll have found that your word has found its way into the dictionary. How else do words appear?

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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