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Cheryl Flemming
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0 posted 2001-08-03 10:54 PM



May the wings of my love
Sweep you off your feet
And fulfill
All your dreams
May we fly so high
In the starry sky
Capture the moon
And gaze into each other's eyes
May the magic of the twilight
Fulfill all our needs
Watch the morning sunrise
On a sandy beach
As it warms  our hearts
And tickles our feet
May the rush of the waves
Come rolling in
Like the love in our heart
And never rescend
May we walk through life
Hand in hand
As our journey begins
May we fill each day
With memories
Oh love and happiness
For eternity
Take what I give
But only what you need
For the love that I have
Will be a constant feed
For love is a constant giving
In happiness and forgiving
So let my words
Penetrate your heart
For it is the beginning
Two souls, one heart


© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Flemming - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-08-03 11:08 PM


(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Cheryl, this is sooooo beautiful! Yes, yes, he will always sweep you off your feet and melt your heart with the words he shares with you every sunrise and sunset. (smiles) This is sooooo beautiful it made me cry, sweet friend, I know his sweet heart melted as you read this to him! (big hugggsssss) You always write of love so angelically! More, more!!! (giggles delightedly) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

jwesley
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2 posted 2001-08-03 11:15 PM


I see Knights in Shining Armor, Fair Maidens,
Castles before the setting sun...such is love and may your hearts always be one.


jwesley

Alan
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right next door
3 posted 2001-08-04 07:50 AM


This is so heart felt. It is beautiful. IT makes me smile when I see love written about in this way. Great job
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2001-08-04 08:04 AM


This would be nice wedding vows...James
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-08-04 09:04 AM


Cheryl,
Well done enjoyed the read. I sort of favor two hearts one soul.

WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04
Posts 212

6 posted 2001-08-04 09:37 AM



Such sweet bliss to live...lovely thoughts.

Willie

Cheryl Flemming
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7 posted 2001-08-04 10:16 AM


Noah*** Thank you my friend.I know our love will last for all eternity.

JWesley*** Thank you so much for your sweet comment

Alan***I am glad I could make you smile for your comment has brought a smile to my face

James***Thank you James.I never thought of it in that way but you know I think your right.Maybe I will read it to my love on our wedding day.

Seymous*** Thank you! I two favor two hearts beating as one.

WRBreezin***Thank you so much.  

Sven
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8 posted 2001-08-04 02:15 PM


wonderfully done. . .  

this is one the highest expressions of love. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2001-08-04 06:27 PM


Cheryl
This was absolutely beautiful with wonderful imagery.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
10 posted 2001-08-04 06:37 PM



Well this honeybee loves romantic poetry, and you speak of love so wonderfully  

Melissa~

Cheryl Flemming
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since 2000-09-14
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11 posted 2001-08-04 08:15 PM


Sven thank you so much for your wonderful comment.

Sue thank you so very much

Melissa thank you for your sweet comment.He makes it easy to express my love.

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