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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-08-03 06:58 PM




     The days pass so still.
     Yet there is a presence ,
     which you can feel.

     Anytime the wind blows,
     or you hear a baby cry,
     you can feel him there,
     keeping a watchful eye.

     And when you feel alone,
     with all your trouble and
     despair,
     turn to him for comfort,
     for he is always there.

     So let him hold your hand,
     and guide you through each day.
     His presence is always there,
     always showing you the way.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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rwood
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1 posted 2001-08-03 07:14 PM


A calming and rewarding verse! I love reminders of the one who cares the most. Thank you!  
Sincerely,
Regina

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-08-03 07:17 PM


Sometimes we need a gentle reminder of just who HE is.  I needed to remind myself of this today.  Thank you for your sincerity Regina, it is much appreciated.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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3 posted 2001-08-03 11:50 PM


indeed we do GS. . . and thank you for it. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-08-04 09:49 PM


thank you for the gentle reminder...
lovely thoughts and intend here GS  
jm

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

inot2B
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5 posted 2001-08-05 05:13 AM


Very reassuring poem, we are never alone.

Terryloveiris_85
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6 posted 2001-08-06 11:18 AM


very nice. i liked this. very thought provoking.
~iris

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

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