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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-08-03 01:47 PM




                                       contact

                                       perhaps again to
                                       touch you
                                       as soft, a stroke on
                                       kitten’s fur
                                       allowing some purr of
                                       you to come
                                       forth

                                       grant me traces
                                       along
                                       a silhouette of you
                                       my finger outlining
                                       your memory
                                       defining
                                       on the back of
                                       my iris
                                       in long recall

                                       might you summon
                                       again
                                       my hand
                                       in yours
                                       how my skin awoke
                                       beneath the
                                       feel of you,
                                       with my lips

                                       on yours

                                       close your eyes

                                       envision

                                       contact

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Nan
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1 posted 2001-08-03 01:53 PM


Envisioning...



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2 posted 2001-08-03 01:54 PM


moistened lips ready
eyelids closing as face tilts
anxious heart pounding
lips meld in soft awareness
now dreams meet reality

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SmittenKitten
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3 posted 2001-08-03 02:02 PM


wow.....this calls up wonderful memories that's for sure!  Beautifully written Lady....it is going into my library!
~Krista  


"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-03-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-08-03 02:06 PM


Purring here.  Very nice piece.
Auguste
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5 posted 2001-08-03 02:10 PM


Very romantic and softly sensual.  A nice way to begin my day.  Thanks!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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6 posted 2001-08-03 02:22 PM


lovely write... I enjoyed!
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-08-04 09:58 PM



                                       grant me traces
                                       along
                                       a silhouette of you
                                       my finger outlining
                                       your memory
                                       defining
                                       on the back of
                                       my iris
                                       in long recall

                                       might you summon
                                       again
                                       my hand
                                       in yours
                                       how my skin awoke
                                       beneath the
                                       feel of you,
                                       with my lips
=========================

the view is quite lovely thru your eyes lady..
this is romanticly wonderful  

Logan
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8 posted 2001-08-05 02:36 AM


Ahh, what a wonderful and tender write, can feel the imagery come alive..very tender smile
inot2B
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9 posted 2001-08-05 05:03 AM


Very sensuous
Enjoyed much

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2001-08-05 10:31 AM


Lady In White - you express the wanting well, very well indeed. Loved reading this writing...

BC

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11 posted 2001-08-05 12:37 PM


LadyInWhite~
Intoxicating~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

cpalmer
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12 posted 2001-08-06 01:52 AM


With this I am going to bed and shall envision 'contact' This was wonderful!
Love the layout!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2001-08-06 06:17 AM


5 4 3 2 1 ... contact ... James
Constance
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14 posted 2001-08-06 09:23 AM


Oh dear Lady--how you did pour the words, and how greedily I drank them down!
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