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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-08-03 12:46 PM


Inspired by cpat hair
~*~

it doesn't match up
not the least bit congruent
seek concinnity

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-08-03 01:35 PM



in matchless spirit
finding ways to strike notice
of that said before

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-08-03 02:19 PM


yep..sums it up pretty well and in fewer words than I used... Nicely done!

Faust
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3 posted 2001-08-03 02:26 PM


Thanks for introducing me to "concinnity".  Nicely done.

[This message has been edited by Faust (edited 08-03-2001).]

BrightStar
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4 posted 2001-08-08 05:54 PM


Nice poem, but I don't think I'll ever use that word.

[This message has been edited by BrightStar (edited 08-08-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-08-13 05:01 PM


InterLoper~
Found this little jewel on the back pages~
Muchly enjoyed~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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VAS
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6 posted 2001-08-15 12:50 PM


yep, like the word concinnity, wonder if it will stick in my mind and appear in my writing one day...hopefully my writing may sometimes embody it, if not use it

great poem, sir

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