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The Knave
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The Knave |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Knave Her whispers slide across my skin Like the echoes of desires sin Like sultry from a bass guitar Like sex exudes a nude Renoir Her essence rubs and raws my nerves Like the breasting of her curves Like firry red that moods a sky Like flaring flames of cravings cry. It is an ache of tender sore An ache that calls for more and more A gnaw that makes my heart to weep A reap that brings a fevered sleep. A mist of magic veiled in goal That picks the lock the door my soul Cuts across umbilical tie And stops the madness of my why. So crave awakes the human knave. And drowns the slave beneath its wave. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What stronger pull than, this burst of emotion's crave.... Excellent, but then, you are always in this category, and we intend you stay there... where you belong! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Excellent write Seymour... well done indeed! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Her whispers slide across my skin Like the echoes of desires sin Like sultry from a bass guitar Like sex exudes a nude Renoir Her essence rubs and raws my nerves Like the breasting of her curves Like firry red that moods a sky Like flaring flames of cravings cry. ================================= A mist of magic veiled in goal That picks the lock the door my soul Cuts across umbilical tie And stops the madness of my why. So crave awakes the human knave. And drowns the slave beneath its wave. ================================= oh my ... Oh My ... OH MY!! Gawwwd I LOVE the way you write!!!!! This is SUCH A COOL POEM!!! And ya know...It was bound to happen ... Randy has become the poet we all knew he would... how could he not...look who he learned from.. the master...*L* seriously tho...Sy this is outstanding inspire. this is Classic Sy poetry... (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)  and it tis I who is the slave...to your every rhyme... *winkiewinkie*  me  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is great! Like to see men have these feelings.. Sandra |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is Seymour "unplugged"! And what a way to share with us. Wow! Sincerely, Regina |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Emotion certainly can overtake us, can't it? I surely looks like you've been there, Sweet Sy..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Your sun shines o'er my glen. Cpat hair, Thank you for the excellent. JM, The nector of your flower Just radiates with power Love ya, Randy Cat, Sweet comment, thank you Rwood, Thank you for the WOW. Nan, Miss you sweet. *L* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy: What turns the knave in cull-de-sac is road so paved with passion's lack I think the slide of engine's roar is now turned into passions door. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you a wonderful comment. |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
"Her essence rubs and raws my nerves Like the breasting of her curves" Loved the entire piece, but these two lines are the ones that made my heart ba-dum-bum. Wonderful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Constance, A ba-dum-bum thank you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sensuality expressed...James |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this is just so great!! you just get better and better, Sy I truly enjoyed the read! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, A sensuality thanks VAS, Thank you for the rave. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Whew! Sir Sy?! Oh my! This is classic poetic sensuality at it's best! This is amazing, take a bow and call yourself a poet  Melissa~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Comming from you this is a high compliment. Yhank you. *L* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - a'hhhh, so desiring and caring you write. A romantic you show in this, and others I have read of yours. But this, well words escape me, ......... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, And words escape me your kind comment. Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Great *sigh* of Sy ~ You've just got the *magic* happening~ You romantic soul, you ! I love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, That's me, thanks sweet. *L* |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A luscious cherry of a poem, Sy. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Mark |
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