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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-08-02 11:03 PM


Heavens Rain
By: Noah Eaton
3/13/01

Heavens rain
Falls from your eyes
When you look at me
And I know that you’re alive

Touching your face
Knowing you are real
One solid smile
Looking at my dream glowing so ethereal

Hugging you close
Listening to the wind whisper
As I hear you breathing
My eyes sparkling in rapture

Sharing a romantic flame
Between you and I
Hidden glory unlocking in loves kiss
I soar higher with you to the heavens, slowly we rise

Watching the way you my angel lightens
When I share my love for you I’ve longed to confess
To hold you would be heavenly
When I am in your arms I feel joyfully blessed

I want you
You are the love of my life
Let me make you eternally happy
Oh love, it’s just a matter of time


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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1 posted 2001-08-03 12:04 PM


Oh, so very beautiful! Wonderful write here!  

Sauni @~~~>~~

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2 posted 2001-08-03 04:46 PM


very nicely done.... hope that time comes soon for you
rwood
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3 posted 2001-08-03 09:01 PM


Sweet love, written so wonderfully. I, too hope you receive your wish.
Sincerely,
Regina

jwesley
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4 posted 2001-08-03 10:06 PM


Hang on to that thought me friend...the end is worth it all.

jwesley

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