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Open Poetry #15

Time Will Ease The Hurt

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-08-02 10:37 PM

Time Will Ease The Hurt
By: Noah Eaton
8/2/01

Time will ease the hurt
Every tear is notified
To the good Lord above
His promises always solidify

Fill your hair with flowers
Each one representing a wish
Tears fall like a rainstorm, bleaching to color
Blushing God's smile across colorblind lenses

Sorrow can leave imprints on your heart
But you are always in good Hands
Suppose from your reflections
Make yourself a hopeful chant

Time will ease the hurt
Your moment is approaching
Torn wings will mend again
Love will do all the healing...

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-08-02 11:45 PM

Indeed true...Wonderful write!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

7
Member

since 2000-04-26

Posts 113
Amherst, MA, USA

2 posted 2001-08-03 12:14 PM

I like it, especially body references. A counter-argument, however:

"They say that time will make all this go away, but it is time that has taken my tomorrows and turned them into yesterdays."

Ben Harper, Walkaway

I suppose it's all in how you define time. Who knows?

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

3 posted 2001-08-03 12:15 PM

One can always hope for healing.

Shannon

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

4 posted 2001-08-08 05:50 PM

Noah

Some us have deep wounds from being hurt and, you are write, time will heal. Nicely done.

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