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tophat
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since 2001-08-01
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0 posted 2001-08-02 09:30 PM


            THE WORLD'S SADDEST MAN

        I SAW A MAN IN A CIRCUS
        THAT TRAVELED ALL OVER THE LAND
        FOR ONLY A QUARTER YOU'LL SEE HIM
        JUST LOOK FOR THE WORLD'S SADDEST MAN
           
        AFTER YOU BUY YOUR TICKET
        I'LL TELL YOU WHAT YOU'LL SEE
        A MAN TRAPPED INSIDE OF A BOTTLE
        PUT THERE BY YOU AND BY ME
           
        WHEN YOU LOOK INTO THE BOTTLE
        LOOK DEEPLY INTO HIS EYES
        IF YOU LOOK CLOSELY YOU'LL SEE IT
        THE REASON THE SADDEST MAN CRIES
           
        DON'T BE TOO QUICK TO JUDGE HIM
        TO OFFER UP PITY OR SCORN
        WE EACH HOLD A KEY TO HIS FREEDOM
        WE HAVE SINCE THE DAY WE WERE BORN
           
        THE GLASS THAT SURROUNDS HIM IS HATRED
        THE TEARS THAT HE SHEDS ARE FOR MAN
        AS LONG AS THERE'S HATE AND OPPRESSION
        HE'LL BE THE WORLD'S SADDEST MAN
           
        BEFORE THE SHOW HAS ENDED
        I HOPE THAT YOU'VE FIGURED IT OUT
        THAT WE DIDN'T LOOK IN THE BOTTLE
        WE WERE THE ONES LOOKING OUT
                                                                                        JCSsr (tophat)

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elusive1
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 15
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1 posted 2001-08-02 10:53 PM


very well written - very good form, and substance to boot... I'm very impressed!

Nan
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2 posted 2001-08-02 11:14 PM


Nicely done, tophat... Welcome to Passions - It's a great place to take your hat off and make yourself comfortable...
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