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So Softly Glowed
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So Softly Glowed |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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So Softly Glowed ~*Marge Tindal*~  ~Softly glowed on August moon sighs caught in total mesmerize of loving thoughts on the rise Set to shimmer cross the miles sending beams of glowing smiles Lighting night dreams of those captured in such loving glow Out across a wistful sea love of you resides within me~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Glowing write of love...thanks for the timing! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I always enjoy the cleverness of your "shape" poems, and I loved the verse within your moon, the flow, the rhyme and beauty in this is wonderful  Melissa~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sigh, the fool, ahh, I mean full moon is not yet, you know. You are jumping ahead and making all the lovers look anxiously to the skies on your advice...very gentle smile, hmm, with a small chuckle too |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
oh yes, Marge......this is perfect! And the full moon is tomorrow! Wonderful, as you always write.......and p.s. (thank you for the congrats email!) The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
and the "love of (your pen) resides within me~ ".....  ************************ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ah, Marge and the moon...a love duet as always..and doesn't matter full or slivered or cut in half, she'll swoon to the tune. Lovely! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. Melissa~ Thanks for the reply. Logan~ Tee-Hee ! Anticipation is half the allure ... and she's dressing for the full~ *Hugs* SunnyOne~ Enjoy that full moon, sweetie ! *Hugs* MyEnchantedMelody~ Awwwww ! Thank you. Martie~ Girl ... I just LOVE that moon-tune !  Love you too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, Marge,goodness, Girl, you always find the right words,and everything you write is just wonderful! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge This was so very beautiful and filled with heartfelt emotion. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
on August moon sighs caught in total mesmerize ======================= I saw this moon lastnight...with its yellow halo around it... and of course..when luna is on high... so is your inspire.. perfect Margie..perfect  me |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Moon drops and night beams. You are so great at making people think of things differently. And you even shape it all out It's always a special read. Sincerely, Regina |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I've heard of your love for the moon...I am right there with you! This is just beautiful....as always! Hugs Cindi |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I think we should rename the moon... We'll call it 'Marge's Place'... Whatcha think? This is too kewl, my friend...  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I like that idea, Nan...we could name it "Marluna".... |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Beautiful words presented perfectly! I enjoyed this very much. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Got me sighing here...you just have such a wonderful way of penning the moon...I never get tired of reading it. Lovely, sweet lady. I second Nan...Marge's Place it is!  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Margie girl, I loved this. As always, awesome writing from your pen divine. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ Thank you so much. SueTang~ I'm really glad to know you enjoyed it so. JanetMarie~ She's in the full now ... and I've got rainy skies hiding her. But ... I just know she'll peek out for me soon. RWood~ Thank you. I'm just a convicted 'moon-a-holic' ! Cindi~ LOL ! Somebody been 'howling' 'bout me ? Tee-Hee ! Nan~ Thank you, lady !  I'll take that offer ! LadyInWhite~ *giggles* Illusion~ Thanks a whole bunch. Vicky~ Awwwwwwwwwww ! I just want to share her beauty with everyone ! Love ya' GentleSpirit~ Thank you muchly. Hope she 'glows' on you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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