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The Key
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The Key |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
The Key The key to my heart, I've broken in two One piece is in the keyhole, The other I give to you When you're ready to come in, You know what to do Touch your piece to my heart, With open arms I will welcome you |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
It might be the magic key that mends itself inside the door to your heart! What a great thought!! Loved it!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was a great, uplifting piece of writing and I loved it. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is so tender in its brevity...a simple, truthful write... "here it is".... I like this.... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I agree with the above comments, perfect in it's simplicity. lovely... ~Tier |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice in its simple statement and romantic feel.. I enjoyed! |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Very Good!!!! I liked this. SOOOOOOO Sweet. |
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