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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-08-02 06:46 PM


Lost
    little
          girl
              Daddy's
                     gone
                  stop
            looking
         it's
       too
   late..
                        
                        

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-08-02 06:49 PM


Only for a while  

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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2001-08-02 08:25 PM


Can we ever find what we lost? Maybe there are ways to replace what we lost so long ago, and so not be lost anymore...
What a great write, Sandra...I see so many thoughts here......thank you!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


athena4
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3 posted 2001-08-02 09:03 PM


Oh Sandra,
    I know how sad this was for you to write. He knows you love him, no matter what happened.  And he loved you too, you have to believe that...
          Love, Elise  

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-08-02 09:04 PM




Perhpas gone .......but there is Sandra  

A lovely replacement I dare say....

A well done piece......with such deep feelings and thoughts.....

Thank you
**********************

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
5 posted 2001-08-02 09:04 PM


Some philosophies in life never change even in the one to teach them is not around. I think you have found some of them...very gentle smile
MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...
6 posted 2001-08-03 07:54 PM


Never stop looking, and realize it's never "too late" -- just understand your motives and the "reality" of the given situation -- this will allow you to make a decision and proceed forward.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Sven
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7 posted 2001-08-03 08:11 PM


I must agree with Elise. . . never doubt that the feelings weren't there. . .

well written. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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