Fields of Green.....inspired by Martie

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Logan
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since 2001-05-28

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Arkansas

0 posted 2001-08-02 05:17 PM

Soft sparkles of light,
take my hand and hold it tight.
Into fields of green be led,
for my span has surely sped.
I asked not why the decide,
with the wishes, I do abide.

Only a blink of darkness there,
then the bliss of peace and care.
No worries left, not feel of pain,
only my pathway to start again.
Comfort drifts around my soul,
lifting me up, making me whole.

To each it be for how it may,
but it was green fields for me to lay.
The feeling was there I wouldn’t be long,
before being surrounded with nature’s song.
For now I will rest in loving hands
then begin a new trip to other lands.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-02 05:23 PM

Beautifully done Logan...

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

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2 posted 2001-08-02 05:30 PM

This is so softly, quietly spiritual...and shall touch many....

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-08-02 06:19 PM

This is very peaceful, but I hope you're not going anywhere..

Beautiful write.
Sandra

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since 1999-06-15

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4 posted 2001-08-02 06:27 PM

I would think that since I've known you, Sweet One that you have crossed over into many different lands. I'm sure those lands are all the more enriched for it! This is tender and sweet of course, and you know I live for tenderness and sweetness.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

5 posted 2001-08-02 06:28 PM

This likes me, Logan.

Nice work!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

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Michigan

6 posted 2001-08-02 06:33 PM

Beautifully written so tender and caring

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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7 posted 2001-08-02 06:35 PM

Awww Logan! Yes, I think that's just how it is...with maybe a library and an ocean mixed in...one to learn from and the other to cross before you can move on. Thank you for showing me this place of peace. Hugs!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-08-02 06:51 PM

Logan~
Such a lovely, lovely inspired piece~
She has that effect on lots of us~
Wonderfully done, poet~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

9 posted 2001-08-04 01:13 PM

I like the different possible interpretations of this one, Logan... for now, I'll settle on it being a blissful nap in nature.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-08-04 07:47 PM

wonderfully spoken my friend. . .

well done. . .

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Honeybee
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11 posted 2001-08-04 07:53 PM

What a vibrant poem of inspire

Melissa~

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2001-08-05 08:30 AM

Only a blink of darkness there,
then the bliss of peace and care.
No worries left, not feel of pain,
only my pathway to start again.
Comfort drifts around my soul,
lifting me up, making me whole.
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your poetic mind is verdant with possibilities and peace

lovely thought Logan...a serene dream.
a sweet gift of inspiration made even sweeter when found in a fellow poets words.
well done poet of the gentle winds

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

13 posted 2001-08-05 08:33 AM

This was like a little vacation beside a cool pool in a green meadow...very well done, and I know I, for one, am deeply grateful that you read some inspiration from Martie, in order that we could all share from this...

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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14 posted 2001-08-05 09:57 AM

brought out the nature lover in me..thank you

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

15 posted 2001-08-05 11:32 PM

Absolutely beautifully written, and my kind of place Logan., Martie wanted a library and a bridge, so if I may:

As I cross the bridge to library fair,
I take the knowledge from this side there.
Soon serenity is lighting up by soul,
Another bridge crossed, to get to my goal.

~To see real beauty you must first look with your heart~
~* Mysteria *~

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