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Jill
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0 posted 2001-08-02 12:11 PM


So elusive
You are to me
Holding back
All that you feel
Afraid to let go
Release what is there
Look into my eyes
Find a love so deep and rare
When our eyes do connect
The spark does remain
Take me back into your heart
Let me love you again



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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-02 12:12 PM


ah.. ellusive indeed.. nicely done Jill..

I enjoyed

cpalmer
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2 posted 2001-08-02 12:43 PM


This is just beautiful!
Cindi

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3 posted 2001-08-02 12:53 PM


well i hope your wish comes true!
rwood
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4 posted 2001-08-02 12:57 PM


Well done. I imagine, if he is shy, he'll snap out of it soon. Enjoyed.
Sincerely,
Regina

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-08-02 02:56 PM


You know Jill I know a few women that I would consider elusive...not so sure if they are hiding their feelings, afraid to display them because they were hurt recently...or perhaps they don't have any feelings for me...James
Jill
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6 posted 2001-08-02 07:29 PM


Thanks all for your very kind replies...and James you are correct, the feelings that used to be are no longer there.
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