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Cloaking Emotions
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Cloaking Emotions |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Where is my coat? For there is a chill I need comfort from And pulling its bulk Around me will in the least allow me the touch Of something warm on my skin. It too can hide At least in part this face That betrays the jagged boil Of turnings Inside… Hand me please my coat And turn away I would not have anyone see me this way |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Oh just wipe your nose on your sleeve, enjoyed. LOL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wouldn't turn away fron your face nor your emotions....cloaking is unnecessary..unless for your own comfort but take a ((hug)) instead ~Wynter |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Dadgum it, Ron. You rite so purty, even when it's not upbeat. And, I agree with Maureen! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Seymour..what in the world do you think I need my coat for? Got to cover up them sleeves you know... people round here get a pit persnickity about my nose wiping.. ( Chuckling) Wynter..you are so sweet... thank you for the very nice words and thoughts..they mean a lot.. Interloper... flattery will get you everywhere... how much I owe you this time bud??? gonna have to redo my budget If I keep paying you to say nice things... ( grinning) Thanks to you all for the comments and for taking time to read... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Odd that I am listening to Phantom of the Opera just now and then read this.... coincidence? or timing? Well done Sir! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Of course it is all in the timing.... coincidence??? Bah..... Thanks for the comment! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sometimes a coat will do the job; other times, a suit of armor... Left me pondering... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
hmmmm.......nother nice work from you my friend...you continue to post exceptional work, hope your muse never gets tired  |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
It's like you pulled the feelings out of my heart and put them into a beautiful piece of work. This is going into my library! Beautiful write Ron... ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
WOW!!! This section especially! That betrays the jagged boil Of turnings Inside… |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Cpat This is truley a beautiful Piece... Bravo!!! Thank You |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
LMAO,the wiping the nose thing caught me off guard. (I am easily amused lol ), Anywho, yes anywho, cool write here! Indeed a great one. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i shall not run nor hide my eyes warmed cloak to fit your size for we have all been pealed of our skin onion seasoned for letting another in |
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