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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2001-08-02 03:42 AM


If that is what
is paining me
that is what I'd
like to slay
the part of me
that's draining me
(part of me
cares anyway...)
even as I score the point
even as I roll the joint
part of me cares anyway--
I cannot numb the love away.

Rare occasions, that I do,
I haunt myself-
I can see through
my reflection
in the glass
as I hear past
daze--pinache..
there is nothing stifling me...
and that be all the pain I feel.

It's nothing
yet so much--
surreal...
pain of yearning
to be healed.

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 08-02-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-02 08:41 AM


It's nothing
yet so much--
surreal...
pain of yearning
to be healed.


Know the feeling... and can only tell you healing takes time...

Nice work here.. I enjoyed

rwood
Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2001-08-02 12:29 PM


I hope the healing comes in peaceful waves of new beginnings. Keep writing.  
Sincerely,
Regina

cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
3 posted 2001-08-02 12:32 PM


Healing will come in due time...
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
4 posted 2001-08-02 12:33 PM



Painfully and powerfully expressed, I'm so sorry for what you are going through right now.  Will a hug be enough  

Melissa~

kaile
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146
singapore
5 posted 2001-08-02 12:37 PM


serenity,

i understand that any words that i pen, while sincere, must seem useless and hollow to you right now. i don't know the words to comfort you, don't want to say things like "you will be healed" for i don't believe in complete healing

what i can do is that i will try to walk beside you through your ordeal. vent all your emotions and i will read and respond

HUGS

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