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Hollowed Chambers of a Life
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Hollowed Chambers of a Life |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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The Hollowed Chambers of a Life So filled with emptiness The echoed sound of screaming In this tunnel that has no end The fear of swimming Never being able to reach the top Heading seamlessly forever In what appears to be the right direction At what point do I look back to check if I am right? I can’t seem to find the signs that guide my way. Does the direction in which I seek even exist? Am I just caught in the current of a pre-determined path? Have I served my purpose of do I even have one? In a picture so big I feel miniscule in stature The thirteenth dot on a trillion-dot screen Adding what color I have to this world in which we live. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Heading seamlessly forever In what appears to be the right direction At what point do I look back to check if I am right? Wow...the lost insignificance of this is amazing! Appreciated much. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks JLR Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
In a picture so big I feel miniscule in stature The thirteenth dot on a trillion-dot screen I do know exactly what you mean. Will have to tell you about my dream sometime. Glad I popped in to catch this one! |
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