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Samia
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since 2001-07-28
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Earth of corse!

0 posted 2001-08-01 10:30 PM


Trembling in the breadth of arms held wide
inside the grip of the wind
mad and raging,
my hair billows freely
above and around me
curving and moving against the sky.

From branches of trees half gone,
my clothes dangle like rags tossed from me.
I am naked
and all the world is all I have!
my bones and skin unhidden,
and my heart free and unsheltered
I accept this embrace with arms held wide
     in the breadth and grip of the storm.

Every texture is a symphony in a hurricane
whose Will is unharnessed.
     in the grip of the storm my heart beats.
     in the breadth of arms held wide
                 i breath.

© Copyright 2001 Samia Hamed - All Rights Reserved
wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04
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aloft
1 posted 2001-08-01 11:18 PM


Hey, another storm lover.
I like this, Samia!  I like the sense of it.
"I am naked
and all the world is all I have!"
Nice line.
Well done!
    

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rwood
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Tennessee
2 posted 2001-08-02 07:28 AM


Just you and nature. Great depiction of being vulnerable and willing as well. Enjoyed.
Sincerely,
Regina

Samia
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 47
Earth of corse!
3 posted 2001-08-02 04:46 PM


Wondering glider and Regina,

Thanks for the kind words, I love storms. Even though I've never been caught naked in a storm, I wouldn't put myself past it! I love everything about them, the build up of the clouds, the wind coming up, the heat (in summer) and then the downpoor, the thunder and the lightning.  
Thanks again,
Samia


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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-08-03 12:50 PM


Well done.  I could feel the thunder in your words.  Write on.

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MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
5 posted 2001-08-03 12:54 PM




To surrender to the wind.....

You have just expressed it all so beautifully and powerfully......

Thank you
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6 posted 2001-08-03 03:11 PM


very nicely done..captures the image and power quite well...


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