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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2001-08-01 08:51 PM




The longest days of my life are spent,
just loving you...
And waiting for the time when
all my wildest dreams come true...
And when that moment comes,
when I can stand there by your side...
The words are said, I give my vow,
to ever be your bride...
And know that what my heart has taught,
must never be denied...
Then that’s the day my future will begin...
I’ll be right here, just waiting,
until then...

These longest days of my life are
passing slowly by...
They just drag on and on,
no matter how many tears I cry...
The thought that keeps me going,
is of how our lives will be...
The day you join me to your world,
and give your love to me...
To be within your loving arms,
will set my spirit free...
I’ll wait for our “forever” to begin...
And dream of our tomorrows,
until then...


The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 08-01-2001).]

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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2001-08-01 09:30 PM


Nicely done, Sunny, and I am waiting too. I see a happy future for you though.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-08-01 09:31 PM


Sunnyone,
I'm sure he'll come along. Enjoyed the read.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2001-08-01 09:34 PM



This is sadly beautiful, I wish the best for you~

Melissa~

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
4 posted 2001-08-02 07:13 AM


Sunny
Keep your chin up and that beautiful smile on your face - the day will soon be here and you will find happiness.  It is in your heart and in your words.

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2001-08-02 09:01 AM


ah ..the waiting.. hang in there! I am sure the day will come, and when it does..it will be all the sweeter for the waiting...

I enjoyed!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2001-08-02 09:07 AM


very nice, Sunnyone

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida
7 posted 2001-08-02 06:36 PM


Lovely words!
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-08-06 05:03 PM


There's nothing at all wrong with this hope, these feelings, nothing at all, they are honest, good, true feelings of love and it's what we all need!  Thank you, Sunny.

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
9 posted 2001-08-06 07:44 PM


That is what dreams are for and believe it or not........they DO come true eventually especially when they are ones of pure honest intent.  Nice format and exceptional flow and cadence in this piece.  Nice to see you still here.
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