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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-08-01 02:18 PM

A spark ignites
Leaping hot flames consume
Only deep embers continue to warm

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-08-01 02:19 PM

tiz love to me

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-08-01 02:20 PM

draw the embers in
shelter the source of all life
hold onto it warm

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-01 02:24 PM

beautifully done... images and thoughts clear and warm...

I enjoyed!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-08-01 03:38 PM

And that warmth we always seek, even on these hot summer days.
Sandra

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-08-02 01:39 AM

Hey Walt, gentle smile, thanks for coming by and figuring it out.

Ahh, Lady, I think yours was better than mine, very gentle smile

Cpat..from you, I appreciate that very much..gentle smile

Ahh, yes, don't we though, Sandra..thanks for being here..very gentle smile

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-08-02 05:33 PM

Yes! They warm just like your heart warms all it touches, Sweet One!

Nice ponderings. Nice message. I miss talking with you.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-08-02 07:08 PM

An awesome senryu!

I love it~

Melissa~

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

8 posted 2001-08-02 07:14 PM

Very well written, so much said in a small space. Fan the fire.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

9 posted 2001-08-04 01:16 PM

The first thing that I noticed is the visual form of the poem "fanning" out in its progress. Then, I appreciated the imagery, and lastly its theme... Nice "little" work you have here, Logan.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

10 posted 2001-08-04 03:00 PM

A beautiful progression - now if only someone isn't standing nearby with a bucket of cold water???

My own bad jokes aside, I liked this very much.

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