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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-08-01 01:46 PM


Anticipated
Entrapment
Incorporated
Openness
Until
Afterthoughts
Enticed
Introspection
Overtly
Undermining
Appropriate
Excursions
Into
Orchestrated
Unsavoriness

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JLR
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1 posted 2001-08-01 01:54 PM


This series is intriging...your abilty, amazing!
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2 posted 2001-08-01 02:04 PM


JLR.. thanks for the very nice words... just playing with a form and sounds... this one was to follow the vowels a e i o and u
one word per line using each in succession while still making some sort of sense to the reader. Not sure how much sense it makes... but hey... it was intriguing to try..
Again... Thanks for the comment and the nice words...they are appreciated

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3 posted 2001-08-01 02:19 PM



and
eventually
intensifies
overt
understanding

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4 posted 2001-08-01 02:23 PM


yes....in the form and the spirit of the orginal.. nicely done!!

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5 posted 2001-08-01 02:56 PM


"orchestrated unsavoriness?"  Oh, Ron, you rascal ...

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm

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6 posted 2001-08-01 03:29 PM


intriguing, may try it

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7 posted 2001-08-01 04:02 PM


to expand my muse to this level of vocabulary would take a life time, but dang if she and I don't enjoy it immensly when you do it  
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8 posted 2001-08-02 12:41 PM


An
Expressive,
Interesting
Offering,
Undoubtedly...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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