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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio 
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BUYER BEWARE _________________ loving me is not as easy as it seems you might cut yourself on the broken pieces of my dreams is the dreaming worth the waking? hell-hot to corpse-cold too damn young to feel so old is the having worth the taking? my history has made me what I am (not that you should give a damn) but it needed to be said the man who wants me needs to know that if he asks me, I might go but never meekly where I'm led. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) Like the tone and the message... nicely done... and the title fits well.. good work! |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
thanks Cpat, but I typed merrily along and submitted without thinking about the language.I'm worried some might find it offensive, tried to delete, but don't know how. ack! Hope I don't get in trouble. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this is just too, too much! I agree with Cpat Ron...Hair. I certainly enjoy reading your stuff. By what you say, this is off the cuff??? I think you'll be okay, Constance...hell is a place, though a hell of a place I hear and Rhett Butler took care of that other word in 1939, I think. |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
Well said! shannonM |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Whew! Powerfully said! Melissa~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Paradoxical, but honest... Sounds like an intriguing offer... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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