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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2001-08-01 12:20 PM


Suffer delicious Love

Pretend there's
Hope
Defy tragedy's nightmare
Make Passion understand your dreams
But

Never

Be


Idle


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)


"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-01 12:23 PM


Yes.. nice message in an interesting form.. I enjoyed Mark... and enjoyed especially the look of the poem on the page coupled with the meaning... Nice work
MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-08-01 12:26 PM


Thanks, Ron...  this one may be one of my favorites, so far...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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3 posted 2001-08-01 03:35 PM


Agree 100%  
Sandra

rwood
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4 posted 2001-08-01 11:24 PM


This one is it! Live, Live, Live. It screams, it encourages, it cries, it does it!
Nike: "Just Do It". Comes to mind. DO something!
Sincerely,
Regina

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-08-02 01:07 AM


Thanks Sandra.

Regina -- pretty much.  "Fight the inertia".

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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6 posted 2001-08-02 03:31 PM


Mark,
     Truly sage advice, I think I'll take it!
Wonderful...
            Elise

SmittenKitten
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7 posted 2001-08-02 04:38 PM


Definitely words to live by...this is a keeper    love it!
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

SmittenKitten
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8 posted 2001-08-02 04:40 PM


hehe...shoot.  I forgot to click the "add to library" box!  Is there no other way to save someone's poem there?
MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2001-08-03 05:26 PM


Thank you, Elise...  if it works -- use it!

Krista -- it's nice to be kept...  Thank you.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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10 posted 2001-08-04 09:06 PM


a nice motto to live by...keeping this too...
Janet Marie
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11 posted 2001-08-04 10:06 PM


very cool write Mark...
an ambitous creedo
I like the passion in this consise piece.
your experimentation in succinctity seems to be catching on these boards...
ya know what they say...
imitation is the greatest form of flattery  
well done poet sir
jm

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

MARK V SHELDON
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12 posted 2001-08-06 08:47 PM


Thank you, faterider -- a big smile to you!

JM:  thank you very much...  I've never been much of a "follower", but I'll definitely apply what I can learn...  This experiment is a lot of fun and helping me to see things from another perspective which is always invaluable.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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