Open Poetry #15 |
Twenty or Less...#26 |
MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Suffer delicious Love Pretend there's Hope Defy tragedy's nightmare Make Passion understand your dreams But Never Be Idle (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes.. nice message in an interesting form.. I enjoyed Mark... and enjoyed especially the look of the poem on the page coupled with the meaning... Nice work |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thanks, Ron... this one may be one of my favorites, so far... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Agree 100% Sandra |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This one is it! Live, Live, Live. It screams, it encourages, it cries, it does it! Nike: "Just Do It". Comes to mind. DO something! Sincerely, Regina |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thanks Sandra. Regina -- pretty much. "Fight the inertia". -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Mark, Truly sage advice, I think I'll take it! Wonderful... Elise |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Definitely words to live by...this is a keeper love it! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehe...shoot. I forgot to click the "add to library" box! Is there no other way to save someone's poem there? |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, Elise... if it works -- use it! Krista -- it's nice to be kept... Thank you. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a nice motto to live by...keeping this too... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool write Mark... an ambitous creedo I like the passion in this consise piece. your experimentation in succinctity seems to be catching on these boards... ya know what they say... imitation is the greatest form of flattery well done poet sir jm slow burn ... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, faterider -- a big smile to you! JM: thank you very much... I've never been much of a "follower", but I'll definitely apply what I can learn... This experiment is a lot of fun and helping me to see things from another perspective which is always invaluable. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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