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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-08-01 06:25 AM


A Model's Life

She's got everything she needs
she's a model she don't look back.
She's got everything she needs
she's a model she don't look back.
All the guys think she's beautiful
and she is as a matter of fact.
One day she was ask to pose
sans any clothes.
One day she was ask to pose
sans any clothes.
She had a perfect nose.
Perfect breast and toes.
And everybody knows
she would look perfectly
great sans her clothes.
Alas she was not impressed
by this request to get undressed.
She promptly told her hosts
"If you don't mind at all
I will pass on that request.
I choose to keep my dress.
While I believe it is a models
job to model lingerie, a hat,
a swim suit, a jacket or a dress,
what exactly is a model selling
when she model's while undressed?"
The host was not impressed.
The model she was blessed.

Jameslee@August01,2001
"She's got everything she needs
she's a model she don't look back."
Compliments of Bob Dylan.


[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 08-01-2001).]

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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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1 posted 2001-08-02 12:26 PM


A poignant message, James -- I'm surprised no one else has responded.  Guess I better "bump it back up"!

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-08-02 05:32 AM


Thanks Mark...yeah it seems like to me that a models life is king of rough sometimes...everybody wants to do nude photography...some jump at the opportunity and some have reservations...James
Ariana
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3 posted 2001-08-02 07:23 AM


When a model has a fantastic body, she can model anything from hats to shoes - she doesn't need to go nude. Nicely done.
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee
4 posted 2001-08-02 12:08 PM


beauty and brains. What a gal! Some things only a mother/husband should know! Old fashioned I am. Great message.
Sincerely,
Regina

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2001-08-02 12:26 PM


nicely done! Not sure how I missed it the first go round... but glad I caught it now.


cpalmer
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6 posted 2001-08-02 12:45 PM


This is great! I love a person who has morals...So true, what are they selling when they are not dressed?
Cindi

kaile
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7 posted 2001-08-02 12:56 PM


good sentiments made...and i like the way you revolved your poem around the lyrics of Bob Dylan's song...pretty creative
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