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I Call You Out
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Call You Out ~*Marge Tindal*~  Make no mistake, I call you out Shadow of half-hidden doubt Stand before me, face to face I will defeat you in this place Demon deep, though you may be No longer will you hide in me Take your leave, I will not cower Recessed in curtains of your power I tremble not, in drench of fear You will not conquer from the rear Face to face I will dethrone The power that you think you own I call you out - turn around Fortress in myself is found Fright of you - I have none Fear, I feel your time is done Embodied in new attitude I proclaim victory in magnitude~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Go Marge!  I love this. I must keep it and read it any time I start to let my fears and doubts overtake me! Awesome write!~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--you are a fortress...I have seen it. I love the strength of you! Hugs! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ I am pleased to know that you would find strength in this~ Good for you ... and *Hugs* Martie~ Thank you sweet sister of my heart.  You know the 'why' of my mission~ Love you bunches~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
More power to you Marge, this was such a strong piece of writing. Take care...Sue Suetang |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well there is a lesson to be learned in this one, and I think I just learned it! Nicely done Marge. ~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~ |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
I'm not scared anymore!! Go Marge. This is good. |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Awesome words, Marge. Gives strength to the reader too. Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Facing fears with a strong and confident voice. I Love it! "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Without reading others replies, this one needs to be given to anyone who has ever dealt with depression...as a sign of hope that they, too, can deal with it, given inner strength and TLC from kind and loving friends. At least, this is how this one struck me. Well done, our Marge! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge~ I love your strength in this - I have dealt with depression and I relate very much to your words, it should be a anthem for many. Well penned with that classic Margie-style Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- YES! I love this, and I LOVE the power and strength of spirit you've portrayed in these words. "Make no mistake, I call you out Shadow of half-hidden doubt Stand before me, face to face I will defeat you in this place" Very cool, my friend!! Love and hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
False Evidence Appearing Real fear learned over time no one born with those feelings just trust in yourself |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Trying to share with others that strength lies within. Thank you. Mysteria~ Hoping it helps any and all who might have need of the lesson. *Hugs* Gail~ You go girl ! Maeve~ It is with the reader that I gladly share. RSWells~ Thank you. LadyInWhite~ Recognition of fear is half the battle of it's defeat. Face to face confrontation can defeat fear, with help, love and support. Melissa~ By recognizing fear ... and 'calling it out' we can often beat it to the punch. *Hugs* Vicky~ You know how I feel for those who need most to hear this~ Hoping to help shed a little light on internal strength ! Thanks, hon. InterLoper~ Fear sneaks up behind Locks one in a clutch of steel Never shows it's face Summoning of strength Does not come so easily But, it can be done ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very encouraging poem, Marge...thank you for sharing this write of confidence! I love it! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
YES! YES! YES! Yet another great one from you. Crafted as usual in your flow, and very direct in your message. I think I needed this today. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sooooooo ... this fortress in you ....... is there a secret passage in? Well written and of course it IS you. I have no doubt that you can, will, and do conquer any obstacle put in your place. Smilin' here gv ge yuhi |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Marge, You have given srangth and hope to all with this wonderful poem, thank you Throw your heart out in front of you |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very intersting picture. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ I am pleased to know you like the message. Thank you so much for letting me know. TemptyOne~ If you needed it ... I'm glad it was here for you. Thanks. MarkB~ *smiles* You know the way ... just remember the password !  *whispers of gv ge yuhi* Shadow~ Thank you. I hope you are right ! MirrorMan~ Yes ... I agree. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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