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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Shadows~ shadows at sunrise wake love's daily rendezvous dances in silhouetted bliss melding to rest as one with mid-day sun refreshed they rise to dance once more then with a kiss goodnight at sunset part shadows ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A lovely rictameter! Melissa~ |
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Marq Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 222 |
The shape of good poetry! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Well what more can I say? Well done as always! Cindi  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Fantastic job Vicky. ~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely. I don't know all the forms..guess I should learn, hm? But very nice even if I don't know the form.. Sandra |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Vicky this is really nice. Great imagery. I can see the shadows dancing with the sun. Deb |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I will post a "rain" poem just for you! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
I love the way you see things. Very nice. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ When you do it ... you do it right ! Wonderful rictameter form. Such lovely shadows~ Love ya' ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa- Thanks so much...glad you enjoyed. Marq- Thank you.. cindi- Well...what more can I say? Thank you..  Mysteria- Thanks much, sweet friend...glad you enjoyed. Sandra- I enjoy challenging myself with something new every now and then...glad you like this one. Deb- Your replies always bring a smile to my face. Thanks so much.. vandana- Thank you. Irish Rose- Thanks much...I'll be watching for that. Constance- So happy you enjoyed this..thanks so much. Marge- As always, you've made me smile.. Thank you, sweet friend..  hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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