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Saunni
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0 posted 2001-07-31 06:35 PM


I really can't believe I wrote this lol


Stop, Drop And Roll

Let me show you I can love you until the break of dawn
A night to remember your whole life through
Allow me to take you places you've never been
Let me show just what my love can do...

We can lie beneath the stars in the middle of pouring rain
With nothing but the waters between us and the night
I can make you fly higher than anyone can
And, may you find here an even brighter light...

So, let me find sincere moments from me to you
Let us love with nothing but heart and soul
Feel the fire, desire on high
And, when the heat's too hot, stop, drop and roll...

There's nothing like freedom when you're willing to fly
And, nothing like losing a bit of self control
For every fire sparks in the arms of the ready ones
And, when you feel it burning, stop, drop and roll...

If you can take me on just reach for my hand
Find it within yourself to take control
Feel the lovers breeze, but no stopping please
If it's too hot to handle, stop, drop and roll...

You'll be stopping, rolling and dropping
A little rhythm, Baby, hip hopin'
On this soft warm ground just losing control
I want to see you, Baby, stop, drop and roll...

Sauni


Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

[This message has been edited by Saunni (edited 07-31-2001).]

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Saunni
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1 posted 2001-07-31 06:46 PM


I am repying to myself. Sauni, what on earth made you write this? LOL Hmmmm, all I can say is WooHoo LOL.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Sven
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2 posted 2001-07-31 06:47 PM


Saunni, I really don't know what made you write this either. . .but, I just hope that it makes you write something like this again!!     LOL

Wonderfully passionate my friend. . .

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Saunni
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3 posted 2001-07-31 06:52 PM


Sven,I'm really laughing because I look at it and think...Who did this? LOL. Way out from my normal stuff...but was fun. Thanks for stopping by!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Mysteria
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4 posted 2001-07-31 11:21 PM


Well I have to tell you I thought it was simply grande!  Stop, drop and roll indeed, that I would like to see, very, very clever Sauni.

~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~
           ~* Mysteria *~

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-07-31 11:33 PM


Saunni~
When the muses bring you FUN ...
Go with the flow~

Delightful !
~*Marge*~

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Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-08-01 01:06 AM


well, I for one love it!  It made me feel good!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen


Suetang
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7 posted 2001-08-01 01:15 AM


Absolutely beautiful Saunni, I loved this.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

maeve
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8 posted 2001-08-01 01:56 AM


I thought it was great, Saunni.....put a smile on my face.

Maeve

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9 posted 2001-08-02 10:20 AM


I loved it.  Please write more

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