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blondeon
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since 2001-07-31
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0 posted 2001-07-31 04:02 PM


  A dried red rose hanging in my room, reminds me of the love that your heart consumes.
  My lover for your warm smile dries away my every tear.
  The entirety of my being feels deep passion when you are near.
  When apart my longing for you consumes my whole soul.
  As our time has passed being together I know in my heart I want to be with you forever.
  Take my hand my love and lets go on a journey we call life.
  For not only in you have I found my true love but also my best friend.  


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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
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1 posted 2001-07-31 04:24 PM


sounds like you found treasure...

nicely said

Savanna
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since 2001-07-31
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2 posted 2001-07-31 05:41 PM


What a terrific poem.
You must be writing about someone very special.
It's nice to see couples so in love.

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