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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-07-31 02:12 PM



A Simple Truth Senryu

~ * ~
Yesterday's regrets
tomorrow's apprehensions
imprison today
~ * ~

By Melissa P. Monette

© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-07-31 02:14 PM



Very, very true!

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2 posted 2001-07-31 02:14 PM


thoughts are imprisoned
only if we let them hide
speak out set them free


Finally fixed  
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catalinamoon
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3 posted 2001-07-31 09:01 PM


Wow, that is certainly a simple truth. Nice work.
Sandra

Samia
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4 posted 2001-07-31 09:12 PM


Let it be, let it beeeeee! Let it beee let it be....
Do you remember that song? Well, your poem and that song remind me to let it be. What has been done has been done, and what will be is only the result of what we do today. Thanks for sharing! I enjoyed the simplicity.
~Samia

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5 posted 2001-07-31 09:44 PM


Excellent!

If we let them, they will, so easily.

Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-07-31 10:27 PM


Excellently said.  
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